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1 Fallowing The Dark Path To Freedom on Sat Apr 19, 2008 11:21 am

In a Fathomless galaxy, where humans are alien, evil lurks in the shodows waiting to devour with ominous power. The sum of its evil is amassed in the most disirable stone, the diamond. This diamond has the power to annhilate every life form in the universe. The battle to posess this mighty stone rages on, and one planet among all others in this war to control and posess this diamond seeks only to destroy it in this good vs evil. Will one planet at odds with all others prevail?


to be continued...

please do NOT add on 2 this story!!!!!!!!!!!


By Ivy Rox!!!!!!!!! :lol!:

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2 Re: Fallowing The Dark Path To Freedom on Sun Apr 20, 2008 7:23 pm

Chapter one


Ivy was walking in the woods on a peaceful night. She could see the grass flowing in the cooling wind. It felt so good on her fur after a hard days work. She sat in cushion of grass and stared at the starry night above while glaring at a shooting stare.
Suddenly she saw fire in her mind. Animals were screaming in horror of the planet Iseria attacking and killing everything in its path. She could feel her telepathy telling her something horrible was going to happen.
She ran back to her clan letting nothing get in her way of telling everyone that something was wrong, terribly wrong.
Relieved, she had made it back home. She went to the alpha male Cole. She found him lying on the floor in their cave.
“ Cole Darling something horrible is going to happen!” she yelped.
He got up slowly. She could see the pain in his hazel eyes from an injury he got fighting off enemies.
“ Cole, don’t bear to waist energy getting up.”
She could feel the excruciating pain he was going through.
“So, what’s all the fuse about?” he whimpered
“Well, I…. I don’t know how to tell you this but I saw deathly flames destroying everything. The dark dragons fallowing behind the flames and the Ardieons were killing everything! They were looking for…” she suddenly hushed her voice. “ The Pagomi diamond!”
Cole was shocked by her story. He was extremely worried.
“When” he said
“When what?” Ivy questioned.
“ When will they come?” He yelled.
“ I. I…. I don’t know.”
He was upset; she could see tears slowly moving down his silky black fur off his cheek. She knew that he was in pain and that wasn’t the right time to tell him.
She lied next to him and put her paw over his shoulder.
“ Don’t worry, everything’s going to be fine.” Ivy said in a soothing voice.
“ I Hope so.” Cole mumbled.
As Ivy tried to go to sleep she couldn’t help but think what really was going to happen, but she managed to find peace in her mind and finally go to sleep.


To be continued...
p.s. do not add to THIS story! type fallowing the dark path to freedom2 and you an make what ever u want on that!!
by Ivy Rox!! :lol!:

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3 Re: Fallowing The Dark Path To Freedom on Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:50 pm

Ivy awoke the next morning to horrendous growling and fighting. She saw her sister Natalie, fighting a black wolf. She saw strange scars on her neck and face. She knew by the look in this strange wolfs eyes that she had a very hard life.
Niko suddenly jumped in the fight and took the strange wolf down to the ground. Ivy slowly walked over to the strange wolf. Ivy’s’ chest out and proud like a worshiped warrior.
The strange wolf looked up in pain at Ivy from Niko and Natalie holding her down.
“What are you doing in my domain? And what is your name?” Ivy snarled.
“ Im Inomay, and I have to warn you about the planet Iseria coming to attack Pagomia to take what is rightfully ours, the Pagomi Diamond.” Inomay answered.
“ Release her.” Cole commanded.
Inomay rose and shook her fur from the dust from the ground while Ivy coughed from the dust particles taking over her lungs.
“ So… A.… who are you?” Inomay Questioned.
“ I am Ivy the female leader of this pack and this is my alpha male Cole. His brother is Niko and my sister is Natalie. This is Natasha, Keira, Jasmine, John, Noel, Cloud, Jessi, Jessica, and Peter.
“Who told you this?” Natalie questioned.
“ That cat from Tiger Eye village.”
“ What was their name?” Ivy Asked.
“ It was Maliena.”
“ We should have known. That witchy oracle!” Cole screamed.
“ Oh, so you know her.”
“ Yah, we know her.” Cole said in a frustrated voice.
“ Im going to go over there and ask her exactly what she saw.” Cole said.
“We are going with you.” Ivy commanded.
“ Fine, We leave tonight. Peter, Natalie, Natasha, Niko and John lets catch us some food.” Cole directed.
Ivy watched the six of them leave in the distance and she couldn’t help to think of what Cole was going to say to the oracle.

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