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1 The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:43 pm

This is my own little story that I have decided to write. I will attempt to make daily additions to it for anyone that would be interested in reading it.


Here, in this post, I will post updates to the story such as new pages, characters, etc.


CURRENT UPDATE
I have posted the profiles of all important characters.



:face: DO NOT POST IN THIS THREAD OTHERWISE MISTER PSYCHO WILL KILL JOO IN YO SLEEP :face:

Name: Andre Arashi
Age: 16
Race: Red Fox
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Bisexual
Weapons: Two long swords, two .50cal Desert Eagle Pistols, one P90 sub-machine gun.
Element(s): Fire and Darkness

Name: Leena Arashi
Age: 15
Race: Cream Fox
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual, prefering females
Weapons: M-4 Assault rifle, one large battle axe
Element(s): Ice



Last edited by Andre The Fox on Mon Oct 27, 2008 9:16 pm; edited 7 times in total


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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2 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:55 pm

Andre gripped his assault rifle to his chest as his breathing intesified, the sound of bullets ricocheting off the concrete wall that he was hiding behind. Every now and again a high calibur round would pierce throuh the wall near him and he would yip slightly. He closed his eyes and attempted to calm his breathing. When he reopened them, he saw his younger sister shift out from behind the wall she was hiding behind some ways away and dart toward where he was. She jumped to the side as a bullet landed near her foot and she stumbled down beside him, slamming her back into the wall. "Hey bro. I think we may be outnumbered here. You okay?" She asked, placing a hand on his shoulder. Andre yipped, not realising that she was near him. When he saw her he laughed at his own cowardice. "Yeah, I'd say we are sis. Got any ideas?" Now that he realised a few things, he wasn't afraid anymore. He didn't even know what had him so scared in the first place. He lived for battles like this. He loved them. He often volunteered to go on missions that would require atleast three full squads, but he would volunteer to go alone, and ofen times come back without a single scratch. Leena looked through her pockets and pulled out three grenades. "All I got other than my gun are these." Andre took them from her hand and smiled. "Perfect." Andre noticed that the firing had stopped, which meant one of three things. They were either reloading, waiting for him or her to poke one of their heads out, or they were trying to sneak closer. Andre listened a little harder and he caught the faint clicking of guns. "Good, they're reloading." He pulled the pin on one grenade and stood up out of his cover. He lobbed the grenade a good long ways away and it bounced off of the wall and landed inside the hall where the enemies were hiding. He heard one yell and jump out from behind his cover to narrowly avoid the explosion of the grenade. Andre grinned amd lifted up his rifle and fired a few rounds into the body of the misfortunate lizard. Andre took this moment of confusion to leap over the wall and charge at the hiding area of his opponents. When he got to the corner, he whipped himself and his rifle around, pointing down the hall. He spotted the remaining two Dracus and unloaded a few rounds into them, dropping them to the ground. He grinned and lowered his rifle, whiping his brow. His sister ran up to him and looked down the hall, seeing the two dead corpses. "Very nice brother, very nice." Andre looked over at his sister and grinned, and she grinned back.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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3 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:42 pm

Andre and Leena cautiously continued their way down the corridors of the base that they were ordered to infiltrate. As they continued on their way, they started to hear a loud noise behind them. At the next corridor intersection, they got around the corner on opposite sides of the one they were just in and peered down back the way they had just came. For a moment they saw nothing, but then a sentry bot came into view. Both cursed under their breath and hid back behind the walls. They both started to signal to each other, and after a short moment of confusion and frustration, they both finaly figured out they were saying the exact same thing. They slung their rifles over their backs and pulled something from their pockets. Andre's just simply looked like a small metal pole, as did Leena's, but once they put pressure on these items, they changed. Andre's grew into a somewhat long katana, as did Leena's. The sentry bot continued on it's way toward them, completely oblivious for the moment of what was about to happen to it. As it came into the intersection, Andre and Leena quickly leaped out. Leena slid under the sentry bot and sliced the legs, while Andre jumped over the top doing a simple forwards flip, slicing the detectors off the top of the bot. When they both stopped they both jumped in the opposite direction from where they had jumped and sliced the bot in two different areas. A second later, with a tiny flash, the bot exploded. They released their grips on their swords and they went back to harmless pieces of metal, and they continued on their way to the command center of the enemy base.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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4 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:39 pm

A while later, as Andre and his sister continued along their way down the halls, they came through an opening that led into a large dome. They continued walking for a while until they reached the center and they stopped, looking around. "Alright, so, let's see here. Huge ass dome in the middle of a base that is somewhat dark and completely deserted... is it just me or have we seen this too much?" Andre commented as he looked at his sister. She simply nodded her head and raised her rifle up to her shoulder, aligning her eyes with the sights of the rifle, readying herself for anything that may attack. Andre did the same and they stood in the middle of the dome for a few minutes, back to back, waiting for anything to come at them. A few more moments passed then they began to hear many footsteps coming their way. "Knew it." Leena looked back at his brother and grinned. "We did have plenty of time to leave brother." She said and looked forward again as the footsteps got louder. "But what would be the fun in that?" Andre asked her as he immediately sighted in on the first Dracus that ran through the door he was aiming towards. He did not fire however. Troops continued to poor into the dome, filling it fast. In a matter of seconds, the entire dome was filled with Dracus soldiers, all of them hand to hand, luckily for Andre and his sister. Quickly, they both slung their rifles over their shoulders and pulled out their metal rods, but this time, they each pulled out a different colored rod, and both of them had two. When they activated them, their enemies were shocked by what they transformed into. Andre now stood proudly where he was with a spear bearing a cruelly designed tip and a massive tower shield that could easily shelter his entire body. His sister, on the other hand, was now wielding two long katanas of a similar design. The Arashi spear, the Arashi shield, and the Arashi Katana sisters. These were the four legendary weapons of the Arashi clan, and there were few who had mastered the use and abilities of these powerful weapons. Andre slammed down his shield to where his body was behind it and he put the spear's tip forward. Leena got against his back and readied herself for the oncoming attack.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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5 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:54 pm

Everyone stood still for a moment longer before, all at once, the entire dome burst into chaos. At the same time, Andre and Leena charged at their foes, and they charged at them. Andre grinned as he neared his oponents and he skid to a halt. He released his spear and it turned back into the metal rod it was previously and it floated itself back into his pocket. Andre quickly gripped each handle on the inside of his shield with each hand and pulled in opposite directions. The shield split along a previously invisible line. As he shifts them to point towards the enemy, they glow and begin to meld to his arms, turning his arms into two massive blades. His attackers skid to a halt and stared in amazement for a moment. Andre took this opportunity and he leaped into the air. As he started falling back to the ground, he readied one arm to stab into the ground as he hit, and he did just that. A small pulse came from the point of impact, knocking most backwards into those behind them. Andre then swung each arm in an opposite direction, slicing each person misfortunate enough to be in his way into two seperate pieces. He brought both arms up then slammed them down in front of himself, smashing a few and sending others flying. He shook his arms and they returned to normal, the weapons turning back into the shield just in time for him to hide behind it and block the detonation of a grenade. He allowed the shield to go back into it's rod form and he stuck it in his pocket just before slamming his palm into the chest of one of his adversaries. He flew backwards and slammed into the roof of the dome and his allies watched in fear as he came crashing back to the ground.

Meanwhile, Leena was doing her own thing with the twin sisters. Her speed and agility were virtualy unmatched by anyone other than her brother. In the same instant she blocked the sword of an opponent, she slashed the wielder in half with the same sword she blocked with. Already she has dropped many foes, a small pile of them laying behind her. As she ducked under a sword, she quickly slashed her sword, nailing him across the chest. She used this open oportunity to leap into the air. While she seemed suspended in the air for a moment, she unleashed a barage of thirty excecutive slashes down at the mass of enemies below. Invisible blades of wind slammed into the ground in a frenzy, leaving a massive hole in the enemy line.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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6 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Fri Sep 19, 2008 7:09 pm

As the battle raged on, Andre and Leena were beginning to reach the peak of their physical limits, but the enemies didn't seem like they were going to stop coming. They both leaped back into the center of the dome, putting their backs to one another, and they stared at the oncoming troops. Their breathing was coming in heavy pants and Andre's vision had begun to bur from loss of blood due to a large gash in his side he had recently obtained. Leena had a large gash in her arm and one on her leg, both the left side. She stood slightly lopsided and looked back at her wobbly brother. "Andre... I don't know... how much longer I can keep this up..." She panted and looked forward again. Andre whined and kept facing forward. "I know I can't go any longer... shit..." He cursed under his breath. When they thought that they were about done for, they heard a loud hissing noise. They looked around for a moment, and next they knew, a gas grenade flew over the heads of the enemies in front of them and it landed in front of them. They didn't have a chance to dodge or avoid the noxious fumes. They began coughing and wobbling. Andre stumbled forwards and ended up falling on his face. Leena stumbled backwards and tripped on him, landing on him right after. Things started to go dark, then nothing.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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7 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:51 pm

Andre groaned and shook his head gently as he slowly began to regain his conciousness. His head was pounding and throbbing and he could feel the left side of his face wet with blood. He looked around dizzily and attempted to move his arms and legs, but they didnt budge. Then he realised that he was in a sitting position. He looked down and saw that his hands and feet were strapped to a metal chair. He also noticed a large, bulky Dracus standing in front of him. "So you've finaly woken up, have you?" He asked in his deep reptilian voice. He chuckled and walked over to a table and came back over to Andre. "You and that female put up quite the fight against my men. You killed a lot of them you know. That didn't ecactly make me happy." At that comment, with one quick movement, the Dracus that was apparently the commander of this instalation jammed a knife into Andre's thigh. The fox yipped and yelled as the pain seered through his leg. The Dracus pulled the knife back out, which caused Andre to yip again. He panted heavily and glared at the Commander with the utmost hatred. Then the Dracus Commander smiled once more and put a hand on the back of the chair and spun Andre around. Andre's eyes widened at what he next saw. Straight across from him, in another chair, was his sister. She was strapped to the chair much like he was, but she had a piece of cloth in her mouth making it to where she could not speak. She was still unconcious. "You bastard!" Andre yelled. The Commander chuckled a demented chuckle. "Flattery will get you no where my boy." Andre growled at him and glared again. Then he heard a noise come from his sister. He looked over at her as she started to regain her conciousness. She moaned and whined for a while until she finaly looked up and then her eyes widened as well. She tried saying Andre's name, but the gag stopped her. Andre's growling increased as the Dracus Commander started to walk over to Leena, knife in hand. Leena's look changed from that of shock to that of pure terror. She looked at the massive lizard with wide eyes. The Dracus looked at Andre and smirked the most twisted smirk there could ever be. "You know what I'm going to do, Andre Arashi? I'm going to kill your sister, nice and slow, right in front of your very eyes." He said as he put an arm over Leena's shoulders and put his face close to hers. She started to sob and tears began welling up in her eyes.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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8 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:22 pm

Andre growled and struggled with all the might he could muster against the straps that held him down as he yelled. "You bastard! You harm one single hair on her body and I will make sure you die!" The Commander simply laughed his twisted laugh and walked over to a bench hidden in the shadows. He came back a moment later with a cruel looking knife in one of his scaly hands and a pistol now holstered at his side. Both Andre's and Leena's eyes widened as he walked over to her. Leena began to cry and scream more than before, and Andre struggled even harder against his bonds. A twisted smile curled across the Commander's face as he brought his knife near Leena's arm. She closed her eyes and sobbed more. The commander pressed the cold blade against her arm then slowly dragged it along the flesh causing blood to ooze from the cut and Leena to scream an ear splitting scream as the pain shot through her arm. Andre closed his eyes and looked away as he flattened his ears against his head. He opened his eyes back up and glared at the Commander with nothing but pure hate. "You bastard..." He said once more as he began to cry himself. The commander simply laughed again and drug the blade along Leena's flesh once more, making her scream again. An agonizing ten minutes passed for the both of them as the Dracus commander gave Leena cut after deep cut, a small pool of blood forming under her chair and her once beautiful fur was now nearly completely red. The commander had removed her clothes by cutting and tearing them off, leaving her naked. She no longer had the power to scream or cry anymore. All she could simply do is wince at each new cut. Andre's wrists and ankles were bleeding profusely from his attempts to get out of the straps. The Commander tossed aside the knife and then drew his pistol, walking over to Andre. He put the cold barrel against his cheek and got in his face. "Now you get to watch her die." He said cruelly as he moved away from Andre and over to his sister. He pointed the barrel at her head and put it against her head. "No!" Andre yelled and Leena had started to cry once more. The commander glared at Andre and started to squeez the trigger. He kept putting more and more pressure on the trigger, little by little. Finaly, after an entire minute of agonizing anticipation that wasnt in the slightest bit welcomed, there was a loud crack and everything went black...


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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9 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:55 pm

A few hours passed before Andre regained conciousness. He groaned silently as he propped himself up from his laying position. He shook his head. "Wait... why am I on the ground..." He groaned again then his heart skipped a beat as he remembered the events that had occured a few hours earlier. He immediately looked up and looked around the room. It was destroyed. The ceiling was half collapsed, things lay everywhere, and there was the commander. Well, half of him anyways. An expression of mixed pain and terror was still plastered onto his lifeless face as the upper half of his body hung from the trashed ceiling by a black tentacle. The other half of his body lay a few feet away with a small trail of intestines leading to it, and plenty of blood. The next thing he found was his sister. She still had multiple gashes on her body, but no bullet wound. Andre smiled weakly as he thought to himself. 'I saved her... thank you father, wherever you are...' But then he remembered something. She still had lost a lot of blood. He struggled to his feet and limped over to his sister and put his fingers to her neck. She still had a pulse, but it was very weak. He immediately began undoing the straps that held her and put his arms around her. He started to lift her but was stopped short by an extreme pain in his side. He put his hand to the spot and felt something wet, so he looked down. "Fuck..." He said to himself. His sister didnt have to bullet wound because he had been the one that took the bullet. He felt himself get light headed but immediately shook it from his head. Now wasnt the time for him to be feeling his wounds. He forced the adrenaline to flow through his body and he started to lift his sister again. Once she was securely in his arms he started to leave the room. He limped out the door and down the long corridors of the enemy base. Another half an hour later he had finaly reached the door that they had come in. He stepped outside into the light and strained his eyes to see. There was nobody out there. Good. He started for the hill that there base of operations was hidden behind and once over the hill he gently set his sister in the tent and immediately went to to com radio. "Arashi to base, Arashi to base, do you read me?" There was a moment of silence on the radio before someone replied. "This is base, we read you Arashi. Whats the mission status?" Andre put the radio back up to his mouth. "Mission was a success, but we have sustained heavy injuries. Leena is barely alive and I have taken a bullet to the chest. We need you guys to evac us quick..." His voice trailed off as fatigue and pain started to overcome him again. Another quick moment of silence, then, "Roger that Arashi. Eta 15 minutes." Then the radio went silent for the final time. Andre struggled back to his feet then went back over to his sister where he collapsed next to her and fell asleep.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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10 Re: The Final War of Karthan and Crylite on Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:55 am

Andre reawoke a few hours later to the gentle humming that was the engines of a large dropship, normally used for transportation of an entire platoon. His eyes slowly opened and he looked around, his mind fogged and his vision blurred. He saw a white sillouhette and as his vision cleared, he noticed that it was a doctor. He groaned and attempted to sit up, but someone immediately pushed him down. "Stay down Arashi. You are still in no condition to move. The bullet went deep, and the poison from the metal is still in you. Give the anti a few more minutes to clear your system, then you might be able to move freely." Andre groaned then closed his eyes as he waited out the next ten minutes, then his body started to tingle a bit, then the feeling died down, and he reopened his eyes. His vision was perfect again, and his mind felt cleared. "Doc, I think I'm good now." The doctor turned around and looked at him, then walked over with a few instruments. He had his pulse and eyes examined, then he was told he could get up. By this time he realised that he absoliutely wreaked. He headed immediately for the shower room and he cleaned his body, then put his gear back on. He walked back out to the doctor then tapped him on the shoulder again. The doctor turned around and looked him in the eyes. "Doc, I need to know if my sister is okay." The doctor's eyes grew grim and he looked away for a moment then back to the red fox. "Your sister... didn't make it..." Andre felt his heart skip numerous beats as the one thing he dreaded, happened. He felt his fists clench and his teeth bare. The doctor took a step back. Andre slammed his fist into the nearest wall, making a massive dent in the metal. He withrew a bloodied fist then he walked silently to the back of the ship where the soldiers and launch bay were. Andre walked to the large door at the back and he looked it up and down. He stalked over to the lever that opened to doors, all they 200 soldiers on board watching him. He pulled the lever then waited as the doors slowly opened. A few tears fell to the metalic floor, then he leaped from the ship and started the fifteen mile fall to the ground. A good five minutes passed, then the ground started to become noticably closer. He spread his arms and legs out, slowing his fall speed. 'Leena... I'm so sorry I failed to protect you... just like I did with mom and dad...' He closed his eyes and braced himself, then moments later, all he heard was the breaking of ground as his body slammed into the planet's surface.


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Clothes... The necessary evil.

When life gives you lemons, read them and be happy. Very, very happy.

I am known as Andre. Andre Arashi, for those who need specifics. I can make entire armies quiver at just the sheer sound of my name, destroy entire planets with a single wave of my hand. Beware, for I am coming...
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