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1 Eledor's story on Tue Feb 03, 2009 6:54 pm

hi

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2 Re: Eledor's story on Tue Feb 03, 2009 7:00 pm

Okay, anybody who is reading this ignore that first post; that was only a test to see how this worked
Okay so, This story is about my RP character and how he got to where he is; so read and please post your comments if any


(Each year of Eledors life up until he is 14 will be written as a few days, the parts of the story for before Eledor turns 14 are just the major events)

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3 Re: Eledor's story on Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:28 am

It was an unusually dark night; the moon was out and full. Truly a strange night indeed. In the sky strange flying creatures can be seen. On the ground there are strange russling noises. At first, the russling noises sounded faint and far off. But the russling grew louder and louder; closer and closer. Out of the tall grass comes a small, intimidating figure . This figure stood on 4 legs at 4 and a half ft. tal. It had an arched back with wings mounted on it. This figure has a short stubby tail. It also has a long, thick neck that leads up to its head. Its head has a pair of gleaming black eyes and multiple small horns scattered throughout its face. The creature emmited a low flame from its nostrils, illuminating its path. The illumination was just enough to make out the genises of the creature. The creature was a dragon.
The dragon opened its mouth and began to speak.
"I have to get home quikly, man I cant beleive it I'm going to be a father!"
The dragon raced off further into the forest it was traveling through.

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4 Re: Eledor's story on Thu Feb 05, 2009 9:45 pm

Character break: (beware i will often do this when an important character or object comes up)
Name:Dreck
Description:See post before this one
Color(s):all white skin with the black eyes
Personality:Easily excited but normally cool-headed

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5 Re: Eledor's story on Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:05 pm

Dreck was now running full-speed through the forest. He was running so fast that the flame he was emiting barly illuminated anything
Dreck's speed had definatly shown his excitement, he didnt slow down even a little bit
Dreck now began to slow down, he had arrived at his destination. The forest now cleared out. In this clearing there was a large mountain as there were all around this forest. In this perticular mountain however there was a cave that had been dug out. In this cave there lay another dargon much like Dreck, but this one stod on 2 legs not 4

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6 Re: Eledor's story on Sat Feb 07, 2009 11:51 pm

Sweet man. I like it so far ^_^


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7 Re: Eledor's story on Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:24 pm

thanks!

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8 Re: Eledor's story on Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:34 pm

(back to the story)
The dragon in the cave began to speak in a soft loving tone
"Welcome back dreck" The dragon said
"hi, Elena" replied dreck in the same loving tone
Dreck approached Elena and touched his nose to hers
"Any luck with the egg?" incuired Dreck
The two dragons looked back inside the cave and there in the center layed a single egg the size of Drecks head (about 1 ft tall and 1 and a half ft wide)
"I've heard little noises coming from it, I think its going to hatch soon!" said Elena
"Oh wow, I can't wait!" Replied Dreck

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9 Re: Eledor's story on Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:37 pm

Character break: Elena
Sex:Female (obvious by now)
Description: A slender female anthro dragon that has all black skin with white eyes
Personality: often times kind and loving but can turn brutal when needed
a.k.a DO NOT TICK HER OFF

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10 Re: Eledor's story on Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:38 pm

After Dreck had finished talking, there was a starnge, loud cracking noise.
"What was that?" asked Dreck.
The two dragons turned back toward their egg and saw that there was a crack in the egg
"The egg is hatching!" exclaimed Elena
Dreck ran, seemingly at full speed, toward the back of the cave where the egg was. Elena soon joined him at the back of the cave.
The two loomed over the egg waiting for the moment it would hatch. Drecks eyes were wide withe expectancy.
Seemingly out of nowhere there was another crack in the egg, then another and another, the baby had almost hatched.
Finally, after what seemed to be hours the baby had hatched
The new born baby looked aroud with squinted eyes and began to cry.

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11 Re: Eledor's story on Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:43 pm

Dreck found himself at a loss for words, he walked up to the baby and looked at it.
Dreck smiled and said "It's a boy!"
Dreck then picked his baby up and carried him to Elena.
Elena took him from dreck and held him in her arms.
"What should we name him?" she incuired
"Hmmmmm...., I don't know."
"How does Eledor sound?"
"I think it's perfect Elena."
The two now stood there looking at there baby with smiles on their faces.

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12 Re: Eledor's story on Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:17 pm

1 year later, Eledor is now 1
The sun had begun to rise just over the mountain, the dew on the trees and grass began to shine. With the sun now slightly over the mountain you can see that the mountain is where Drack and Elena's home is. A tiny yawn is heard, and Eledor crawls out of the cave.
Eledor squinted his eyes and sat down, letting out another little yawn. eledor looks around and sees nothing, he yet again looks around, but this time he sees the blades of grass on the edge of the forest, near his home, move. Eledor made a little baby smile, giggled and crawled toward the edge of the forest.



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13 Re: Eledor's story on Tue Feb 24, 2009 6:27 pm

Now back inside Dreck and Elena's cave, Dreck had begun to stir until he had awoke. Dreck lifted his head and, with half open eyes, he looked around the cave. Where Eledor had slept now was empty.
"Eledor?" he sayed
Now Dreck had stood up and began looking for Eledor. Now he had begun to look franticly. He walked by Eelna and accidentaly hit her in the face with his tail. Elena was now awake.
"Sorry" he said and began to look again
"What's wrong?" she asked
"I can't find Eledor" he replied
"Oh no, do you think he crawled out of the cave?" she incuired
"Oh no" they said in unison
The two arose and ran out of the cave

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14 Re: Eledor's story on Fri Mar 20, 2009 11:21 am

After the two had reached outside they had looked aroun frantically, but to their discontent they found nothing
"Where could he have gone?" questioned Elena
"I don't know but hopefully he hasnt gone far." responded Dreck
Dreck looked around for any sign of his lost son. He turned toward the forest and saw little footprints "Huh?" he said
"What is it?" said Elena
"Over there footpri..." he cut off his own sentence "OH NO!"
"What?" demanded Elena
"He went into the forest." said Dreck
The two flashed worried glances and fan off into the forset

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15 Re: Eledor's story on Fri May 22, 2009 8:35 pm

Hi everybody I am back. The reason i have been gone for so long is because i couldn't find the site. But after looking for ... forever I finally found it, so now for the thing i have been wanting t do for forever.
I will be holding a search for 3 people who want to join in my story.
During Eledor's life he will meet a few special people, and i want those people to be a few of you.
The points in Eledor's life where he meets people are as follows:
Age 5:Open
Age 9: Filled
Age 12: Filled
Age nine is currently filled by Inomay.
Age twelve is filled by alfabrena. One spot left.
So if you want to take one of the other parts just tell me on this blog and when you want to meet Eledor.
It is first come first serve, so tell me as soon as possible
By the way this will last for a week or until all spots are filled.



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16 Re: Eledor's story on Fri May 22, 2009 8:46 pm

Back to the story now.
Eledor now was crawling very fast. What he was chasing was untellable.
All of a sudden Eledor stopped and looked around.
The bush next to Eledor began to rustle and a snarl came from it.
Eledor now looked directly at the bush, and began to motion toward it.
But before Eldor couod reach the bush, a tall wolf jumped out of the bush.(the wolgf is an anthro)
(Eledor retracts his hand.)
"Hmmm, an easy meal" said the wolf.
THe wolf picked up Eledor, Eledor began to cry
As the wolf drawed Eledor closer to his mouth, Dreck came barreling into the wolf.
The wolf was tossed away into a nearby tree, Elena was followin right behind Dreck.
(Elena runs to Eledor, and picks him up) "Oh Eledor, are you Okay?
She looked at Eledor and found no injuries
"Oh, thank God" she said

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17 Re: Eledor's story on Fri May 22, 2009 8:57 pm

Dreck was now fighting with the wolf.
Dreck rammed the wolf into the tree again, but the wolf counterd by slashing him with his claws across his snout.
Dreck winced back in pain, but imediatly recovered.
"If anybody tries to harm my son, they DIE!" he shouted and rammed the wolf into the tree again.
The wolf cried out in pain and feel unconscious.
Dreck let the wolf fall to the ground, and ran to Elena.
"Are you Okay?" the worried Elena asked
"Yeah, this is nothing, is Eledor Okay?"
"Yes" replied Elena
"Thank God" Said the now releived Dreck"Come on lets go home before he wakes up."
Elena nods and the two walk off
"Eledor Never Do that again!" Said Dreck
Eledor began to cry
Dreck then quickly said "its okay"
Eledor stopped crying and smiled.
"come on," said Elena "let's get home"

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18 Re: Eledor's story on Sat May 23, 2009 3:39 pm

hey ill join ive got nothing else to do realy but read & play w/ my dog (& clean my room )
i think ill take age 12 if ull take me


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19 Re: Eledor's story on Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:34 pm

Soryy people. I won't be ableto post much after this post.
My computer is going hay-wire so i am now sad. :(
I'll post whenever possible

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