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1 somebody continue my story on Sat Apr 26, 2008 2:50 pm

a puppy racing through the woods,run from his own past.he stops looks back and dodges a bite for one of the wolfs.he takes off running and bumps into a black and purple wolf and hides behind it


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The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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2 Re: somebody continue my story on Tue May 06, 2008 7:52 pm

the great panting, shaggy, black wolves stop panting before the purple-black she-wolf. "move aside she wolf" growls the alfa male stepping forward. 'no' the old wolf grunts. 'you will have to find the blood you seek else where. be gone. all of you.' the male growls, showing his teeth, advancing on the she-wolf. "come on sharp tooth" says a large female, steping forward "that blood be tainted anyway." the wolves gave the old she-wolf and the pup one last diry look, turned on there heels and ran back the way they had come. vanishing into the shadows of the forest.

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3 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 07, 2008 8:30 pm

the puppy then faints from exhaustion


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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4 Re: somebody continue my story on Fri May 09, 2008 9:29 pm

how sad!!!

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5 Re: somebody continue my story on Sat May 10, 2008 9:21 pm

as the puup awakens it stumbles over its own feet like a drunk.it then looks up and tries to playfully growl but whimpers in its own pain then faintes again for a few hours


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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6 Re: somebody continue my story on Sun May 11, 2008 3:53 pm

"awaken young one. awake." the pup opened his eyes to see an amaving sight. a golden she-wolf with gold fur and liquid golden eyes. "awake young one. you must get up. you are not safe here. come follow me."

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7 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 8:15 pm

the pup awoke and rose.where r we going? as he followed down the path


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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8 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 8:33 pm

"somewhere safe. hush now. come along, quickly now. come on."said the wolf not even looking back.

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9 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 8:37 pm

the wolf did as was told.the pup then said he was hungry


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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10 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 8:48 pm

"hold on little one. we are almost there." then they were there. the two stood facing the gaping mouth of a cavern. "go inside little one," said the wolf nudging the pup forward gently, "there is a wild dog pack inside. they will take care of you. go on."

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11 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 8:51 pm

okay he went inside and was greeted by a pack of dogs they asked the she wolf "what happened"


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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12 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 8:56 pm

"the others we chasing him,"said the golden wolf, "other then that i do not know. take care of him. i have a feeling that his part in the story of this world is not over."

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13 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:02 pm

ill look after him for a while said the pack leader hell need a long rest


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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14 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:06 pm

"no" said the wolf firmly. "you take him and you raise him. you turn him out and he will be killed. now little one you must learn and you must stay out of trouble. i shall be back to check on him, dog, and i expect to see him fit and well. understood? good." then the wolf turned and a flame of gold and scarlet formed. the wolf stepped through it and disapered.

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15 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:10 pm

whered she go asked the pup as he went 2 go look for her he fell and was exhaust from his journey. as he fell asleep he thought about the next time he would see the she wolf


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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16 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:14 pm

one of the dog mothers hurried over to the fallen pup, picked him up tenderly and carried him into the cave where she lay him among her own pups.

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17 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:22 pm

when he awoke he said im hungry


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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18 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:26 pm

the seasons went by with no sign of the beautifull golden she-wolf. the pup grew and learned as the wolf had insructed. soon he began to forget about the wolf untill she came. "my my little one.you arent so little anymore are you?" said the golden wolf when she stepped threw the flame.

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19 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:29 pm

no im not i never really got to thank u 4 saving my life,plus i never knew ur name


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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20 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:39 pm

"i have no true name, but you may call me venus. and what is your name?" said the she-wolf.

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21 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:42 pm

akumaru ive have learned many strengths


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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22 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:49 pm

"good. for you shall need them. i dont know if you know this young one but, there is a darkness growing. i do not as of yet know what is causing it but i will." the wolf ended with a growl that made akumarus fur stand on end. "keep learning young one. practise your fighting and your navagating. i shall be back as soon as i can." the wolf turned and the strange flame sprung up again.

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23 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:50 pm

wait can i come with u i want 2 train on the way


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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24 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 14, 2008 9:54 pm

the wolf stopped and looked back toward the dog she had helped as a pup. "why would you want to come with an old wolf like me, akumaru?"

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25 Re: somebody continue my story on Fri May 16, 2008 9:26 am

hopefully 2 show u how much ive grown


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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26 Re: somebody continue my story on Fri May 16, 2008 9:15 pm

"mentally i presume seeing as i can perfectly see how much you've grown phisacaly?" asked the she wolf with a raised brow and a smirk.

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27 Re: somebody continue my story on Sat May 17, 2008 10:38 am

thats close enough 2 what i said,so can i come


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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28 Re: somebody continue my story on Sat May 17, 2008 7:01 pm

the wolf sighed and turned toward the youth standing infront of her, "tell me, akumaru, do you know how to travell by the stars, how to hunt without your eyes, to use the earth as your guid?" akumaru opened his mouth to speak, but nothing came out. "i thought so. now the dogs will only be able to teach you one thing out of those three, how to travell by the stars, once you can do that maybe, possibaly, i will allow you to come with me." then the wolf turned and stepped threw the wall of flame and out of sight once again.

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29 Re: somebody continue my story on Sat May 17, 2008 9:20 pm

akumaru trains harder then any of the other wolves.as the leader gets older akumaru becomes the leader of the pack of dogs.learning how to travel by the stars to time but he finally got the hang of it.he continueed 2 train until the she wolf came back


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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30 Re: somebody continue my story on Mon May 19, 2008 8:18 pm

the wolf first spoke with the pack elders before turning her attention to akumaru. "so young one you are leader now. do you still wish to travel with me even now when you have a pack to lead, who look to you for guidence and protection?"

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31 Re: somebody continue my story on Tue May 20, 2008 8:26 am

may i take them along with me as i go on the journey?


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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32 Re: somebody continue my story on Tue May 20, 2008 6:51 pm

the wolf shook her head, "a large group is to noticable. you might be able to take a few warriors but that would leave your pack volnerable for attack."

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33 Re: somebody continue my story on Tue May 20, 2008 9:57 pm

ill leave kiba in charge until i get back.hes next in command and has already been trained on everything.ill 2 wolfs and a pup


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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34 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed May 21, 2008 7:06 pm

the she wolf sighed and hung her head. when she looked back up worried ans sad. "call your people to you and talk to them," said the wolf nodding to the dogs behind the pack leader.

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35 Re: somebody continue my story on Fri May 23, 2008 1:21 pm

the she wolf came pack the next day 2 anxious looking dogs.akumaru step forward and said thatthey had talked about,the only problem is we wont take the pup


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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36 Re: somebody continue my story on Fri May 23, 2008 4:00 pm

the wolf sighed and said, "well that eases my mind a little. bring those who are comeing with us forward and have them eat these. " they wolf nudged forward three packets wrapped in leaves. "they may taste bad but youll appreciate taking them. they are travaling herbs to keep your hunger at bay untill we get to where we are needed. now eat."

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37 Re: somebody continue my story on Fri May 23, 2008 10:17 pm

"crap these taste horrible but satisifng" as the wolfs ate them


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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38 Re: somebody continue my story on Sun May 25, 2008 1:21 pm

the wolf grinned then turned away to speak with the elders again.

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39 Re: somebody continue my story on Wed Jun 04, 2008 8:34 pm

the wolf turned to his buddies and said hey guys want 2 play tag one last time? the oldest said sure 1 last time wont hurt


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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40 Re: somebody continue my story on Thu Jun 05, 2008 8:21 pm

"akumaru" called the she wolf, "say your goodbys and meet me at the great oak. we leave in one hour." then she turned and troted into the shadows of the trees.

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41 Re: somebody continue my story on Sat Jun 07, 2008 2:12 pm

akumaru and his 2 friends met the she wolf at the great oak 1 hour later


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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42 Re: somebody continue my story on Sat Jun 07, 2008 8:59 pm

the sun had set and the stars were one by one appering in the deepening dark. when the 3 friends reached the tree the golden she-wolf was sitting stock still staring up at the stars.

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43 Re: somebody continue my story on Sun Jun 08, 2008 6:45 pm

i guess u like looking at the stars i was told they were the wolfs who had died for us


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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44 Re: somebody continue my story on Sun Jun 08, 2008 7:08 pm

just as she said that they heard screaming. they raced twards it and found a black shewolf with her leg in a trap. she screamed again snaping and diteing it. the shewolf was cole black exsept for a very dark brown mark on her chest. "who are you" the golden she wolf camanded "i'm sielie (sigh- lie)" she wimperd "and my leg is stuck please HELP ME!" she yelped as it dug deeper into her leg.

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45 Re: somebody continue my story on Sun Jun 08, 2008 7:13 pm

the young wolf helped release the trap and greeted the wolf


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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46 Re: somebody continue my story on Sun Jun 08, 2008 8:52 pm

"why are you here sielie?" venus asked, bending over the others injured leg the black she-wolf began to answer but all that came out was a gasp as the golden she-wolf breathed upon the leg which heald instantly.

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47 Re: somebody continue my story on Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:20 pm

wow that was interesting ive never seen u do that before.


_________________
The TRUE reason, why Sasuke hates Itachi...
Sasuke: I... I.. want.... I want...
Itachi: Foolish little brother... oh, come to think of it, you're not so foolish anymore! I know you want...
Sasuke: I WANT CANDY!!!!
Itachi: .... Foolish little brother... I ment power...
Sasuke: I want candy!!!
Itachi: No way!!!
Sasuke: Brother!!! I hate you!!! I'm gonna kill you!
That's the true reason... lol
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48 Re: somebody continue my story on Tue Jun 17, 2008 8:10 pm

the she wolf straitned and flashed him a grim smile, "there are meny things about me u do not know young one."

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